retry's art bonanza
retry_1 02 Oct 2008
new orange sig for the new skin.
i love the text. a PSD i found buried on my school's server gave me ideas, just wish i knew who put it there, it was epic.
i have an avy for it too:
CnC?
Sgt. Nuker 06 Oct 2008
Not bad mate, but I think you need to branch out into other sport genres at the very least. You're American football signatures do look great, but I think you've saturated this thread with too many.
Wizard 07 Oct 2008
Century Gothic is a good choice for Sprite Tags.
Not bad 'Try. A touch to dark in places without a smooth blend, but a difficult style to master. Keep it up.
Not bad 'Try. A touch to dark in places without a smooth blend, but a difficult style to master. Keep it up.
Stinger 07 Oct 2008
I was thinking that all your signatures are on the darker tip, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing as I get the impression of [fast] movement with the figures in the foreground. I'm not sure if I would be left with the same impression if you were to use lighter backgrounds, but I would advise you try something outside of your comfort zone next time in a lighter sig.
Good stuff that I've seen here. Keep it up, man.
Good stuff that I've seen here. Keep it up, man.
retry_1 05 Nov 2008
its been a while.
and i haven't branched much, but i was going through my desktop and found 4 renders of my 4 favorite defensive backs in the league, had to do something with em.
i need a new sig/avy set, so if i find an appropriate render, i might go for a light sig.
and i haven't branched much, but i was going through my desktop and found 4 renders of my 4 favorite defensive backs in the league, had to do something with em.
i need a new sig/avy set, so if i find an appropriate render, i might go for a light sig.
retry_1 08 Nov 2008
i really like the way it turned out, but it's not "me" enough to be my sig IMO:
TheDR 08 Nov 2008
Its a nice sig but looks bland in comparison to the rest of your sigs.
The font i dislike but i do like the simple style.
The font i dislike but i do like the simple style.
retry_1 08 Nov 2008
thanks for the constructive comments doc.
lightsig attempt MKII:
i think this one is better. much better. yet, still football. lol.
lightsig attempt MKII:
i think this one is better. much better. yet, still football. lol.
Sgt. Nuker 08 Nov 2008
Mate, don't take this the wrong way, but can you make a sig of anything else other than the institution known throughout the United States as the NFL (National Football League)? Some are better than others, and your last 2 seem a bit lacking. The last is better than the next to last, but only for the reason it seems like something out of a newspaper (in that the way that it's colored). Font choice is perfect, but outside of those +'s, the rest are all negatives. This is in part because your renders are all cut from the same cloth that is American football. Trust me, I'm not in any fashion saying that you should give up making signatures or that the NFL is trash (I believe the opposite quite frankly). However, what I am saying is that perhaps you should dabble in other things, like when you made your Wolverine signature.
Sgt. Nuker 10 Nov 2008
That is easily your best signature. EVER. The font choice is also quite good, considering that it looks like the old-school comic books used to. Well done.
Slightly Wonky Robob 11 Nov 2008
retry_1, on 8 Nov 2008, 0:38, said:
i really like the way it turned out, but it's not "me" enough to be my sig IMO:
I like the change from usual "dark" style (not that it is/was a bad style though), my main criticism would be that you have gone too far from the dark, the shadows aren't defined enough IMO.
retry_1, on 8 Nov 2008, 2:06, said:
thanks for the constructive comments doc.
lightsig attempt MKII:
i think this one is better. much better. yet, still football. lol.
lightsig attempt MKII:
i think this one is better. much better. yet, still football. lol.
A brilliant comic-esque style you got there, works really well
retry_1, on 8 Nov 2008, 17:35, said:
ask and ye' shall receive.
matching avy can be seen alongside this post.
Another brilliant sig, easily the best of the 3. A tiny criticism would be that your name seems more of an after thought on the sig, rather than being part of it... I would offer advice, but I suck at putting text in sigs, and probably do a much worse job than that
All-in-all 3 great sigs
retry_1 13 Nov 2008
thanks for all the comments guys. i focuced more on the text in this one, i think it was a bit of an improvement.
Warbz 13 Nov 2008
Some sort of filter or blending option would have made the text alot better. Still very good though.
Sgt. Nuker 16 Nov 2008
I'm not a huge fan of the color of the word "Superman", but that is a rather silly thing to focus on when the rest of the signature looks incredible.