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Pav:3d's Photo Pav:3d 18 Oct 2009

Very nice, and pretty true to the concept aswell
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Ion Cannon!'s Photo Ion Cannon! 18 Oct 2009

Your skinning skills have improved substantially. I like the model as well, except the wire between the tail and the body of the aircraft.
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JJ's Photo JJ 19 Oct 2009

Ah cool, looks like something GLA would use. The housecolour bit at the base of the wire looks kinda odd though.
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 11 Jan 2010

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USA Strategic bomber. Doesn't have a name yet. Any suggestions?

:duh:
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Pav:3d's Photo Pav:3d 11 Jan 2010

try making it a tiiiny bit taller, or defining it a bit more on the skin
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Dauth's Photo Dauth 11 Jan 2010

It seems a little pancaked tbh, some more depth would probably help.
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JJ's Photo JJ 12 Jan 2010

Wow, I like that one. =o

Uhh names, uhh Swan? Peregrine? Archer?
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Wizard's Photo Wizard 12 Jan 2010

I agree with the others that it does look very flat, however the render angle could have something to do with it. The skin is very good though. Your skins have improved a lot! Well done you.
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 12 Jan 2010

It's not really flat. I'll post some renders from different angles when I'm at home.
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ΓΛPTΘΓ's Photo ΓΛPTΘΓ 12 Jan 2010

DFC bomber?

It does look like a flying cross. xD
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 13 Jan 2010

new renders of the bomber:

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Wizard's Photo Wizard 13 Jan 2010

View PostStalker, on 12 Jan 2010, 12:25, said:

It's not really flat.

Are you certain about that? It couldn't look much flatter if you tried. What render settings are you using?
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Pav:3d's Photo Pav:3d 13 Jan 2010

Its far too flat :P could pick up the rear wings slightly which would make it look less flat
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 13 Jan 2010

You're right it is flat ;-)

But I like it as it is and I'm more concerned about Ingame-looks.

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could pick up the rear wings slightly which would make it look less flat


I tried. Doesn't look good
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Dauth's Photo Dauth 13 Jan 2010

Could you show us some shots in game to show off the effect you're trying to get with the flatness?
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Ion Cannon!'s Photo Ion Cannon! 13 Jan 2010

I can't see how it would look worse if it was less flat, I imagine it would look alot better in fact.
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JJ's Photo JJ 14 Jan 2010

You sure those renders aren't stretched? Because the plane looks so flat that it gives that impression.
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Shirou's Photo Shirou 14 Jan 2010

Also the cockpit textures look messed up, they should be more sharp edged as well. Now it looks really weird, like the windows are just slapped on it, not naturally.
Edited by Shock, 14 January 2010 - 12:27.
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 14 Jan 2010

less flat version:

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I'm not sure yet which version I like best.

also I don't have it ingame yet, my point was that It wouldn't really make a difference ingame.

And I can't really see what's wrong with the cockpit texture. Sure It could be better, but ... <see sentence above>
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 29 Jan 2010

UPDATE:

A GLA BRDM-Styled Armoured Car or APC

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Wizard's Photo Wizard 29 Jan 2010

That is a very nice model you've got there. My only criticism is that you need to add some darker areas to the skin. Right now all of the panels join up. Traditionally there are dark lines that separate the skin at the joins or corners. What you have are lighter areas, these don't contrast enough imo. That said you've still done a great job with it.
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JJ's Photo JJ 29 Jan 2010

Yea, just needs to be burned, a lot, otherwise, quite good actually, you have no problems with adding details.
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Pav:3d's Photo Pav:3d 29 Jan 2010

Indeed, darker areas is a must, also try some splatter burning with some grungy brushes to make it look more like scratched up metal. Could also try instead of just lightening the edges make them look as thought the paintwork has been scratched off.
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Stalker's Photo Stalker 29 Jan 2010

Thanks for your comments

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I'm not really sure if this really looks better

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I'm a bit confused now, on my laptop it looks light brown and on my PC it looks orange
Edited by Stalker, 29 January 2010 - 17:25.
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CJ's Photo CJ 29 Jan 2010

Well it's color is goldish on my screen :o
I like the model, but the skin is definitely too bright, especially those wheels D:
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