R3ven's Artwork Thread
R3ven 08 Sep 2010
Since I'm looking for any feedback(read: constructive criticism). I honestly don't mind how terribly bad or stupid my artwork(only models atm) is, just please give me some information on how I could improve it.
Got three renders to start the thread with.
Just a random tank turret I made. No tank body, just a turret.
A bunker I made(not good) with a test reflective plane under it.
1440x900 version
A model I just made like, 10 minutes ago. Comprised of only one object, and the first model I've ever put a render template on.
Got three renders to start the thread with.
Just a random tank turret I made. No tank body, just a turret.
A bunker I made(not good) with a test reflective plane under it.
1440x900 version
A model I just made like, 10 minutes ago. Comprised of only one object, and the first model I've ever put a render template on.
Pav:3d 08 Sep 2010
You seem to have your head round the basics, but expand out and make a full model with a lot more detail
Umbrella Secrets 08 Sep 2010
These are not bad, trust me you should have seen my first model of a turret for C&C 3, it was awful. All I can say (this is what I did for my self) keep practicing and think of detail, but not too much detail. May I ask, how did you get your renders like that?
Edited by Umbrella Secrets, 08 September 2010 - 23:51.
Edited by Umbrella Secrets, 08 September 2010 - 23:51.
R3ven 08 Sep 2010
Pav:3d, on 8 Sep 2010, 19:47, said:
You seem to have your head round the basics, but expand out and make a full model with a lot more detail
I guess now is a time I should mention that I've been trying to model for 2 years, on and off Thanks
Umbrella Secrets, on 8 Sep 2010, 19:49, said:
These are not bad, trust me you should have seen my first model of a turret for C&C 3, it was awful. All I can say (this is what I did for my self) keep practicing and think of detail, but not too much detail. May I ask, how did you get your renders like that?
I clay rendered them. Add a skylight onto your scene, lay down a white plane. Go to Render -> Advanced Lighting, and select light tracer. Then just render away.
R3ven 06 Nov 2010
Bump.
Got bored today so I extracted the Soviet Crane mesh from RA3 and it was pretty bugged, but I fixed it. Pic:
Got bored today so I extracted the Soviet Crane mesh from RA3 and it was pretty bugged, but I fixed it. Pic:
Stalker 06 Nov 2010
Could you post a post of the original model to compare?
Right now I can't really see what you have done to it.
Right now I can't really see what you have done to it.
R3ven 07 Nov 2010
That pretty much is the original model, I extracted it, it was pretty messy, so I spent a few hours fixing it up and rigging it for cooler ingame animations.