33 replies to this topic

[smooder]

The transformation is complete!!

I also made this gold one:

[Sic]

Text is hardly readable, and the border doesn't fit with the rest. The render can hardly be noticed.

[Warbz]

i think thats the idea, too be slightly vague, like some sort of art

[smooder]

Course you can read the text!

Well I was aiming for a blended text. :( I liked it.
Its supposed to be a centauro in a snowstorm.

[Warbz]

i dont like the white bits on the front of the tank, very blocky, but otherwise i really like it.

[smooder]

Nice.. The blocky bits are supposed to be snow... it was invisible unless i made it thick like that...

Any other tips on how to improve it?

*Waits for short stuff my unlead teacher to see this*

[Warbz]

the only thing i could think of is to change the background from white to something else, but that would change the whole point of it.

[Sic]

No, only give the font a red outline, and don't let it glow. I don't like the border though.

[E.V.E.]

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i dont like the white bits on the front of the tank, very blocky, but otherwise i really like it

Agreeding with Warbz.

- E.V.E.

Edited by E.V.E., 06 January 2007 - 00:10.

[smooder]

Better?

[E.V.E.]

Much More!



- E.V.E.

[Sic]

Good, but the font is bugging me .

[Warbz]

i like it, btw..that was quick

Edited by Warbz17, 06 January 2007 - 00:21.

[Futschki]

and the tank isnt clear ... I can hardly see that there are a tank

[zill]

I can see the tank but not very good. And the font must be edited

[smooder]

That is exactly ow i wanted the text.

Like i said before.. the centauro is in a snowstorm.

[Slightly Wonky Robob]

its not very clear at all

and i think both of those borders are just default borders built into the program


i rate it a 4/10

but keep at it, you will gradually get better

[smooder]

The border was a default one, edited slightly..

4/10 :(

I'll have to make a new better one.

But if this is 4/10 what was my old one?

[Slightly Wonky Robob]

i actually liked that more, is was so dull (no offense) and alot clearer, id rate that 5.3/10

[Sic]

Old one was much better IMO.

[Futschki]

Yea ... U will Improve Just Keep trying

[BillyChaka]

Too bright. No clarity.

[smooder]

I made one with animation.. took a while... i know its not good. But its practice. I think I should have made the text move in and out too.



I think ive done the animation good. The picture is crap though.

[Whitey]

*Shudders*

[smooder]

I know.. do you think the animation is smooth enough?