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[Warbz]

just a trial thing, but...
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I just want some critisms on it before I have another go, at a similar type.

EDIT: ah i buggered it up >_<

Edited by Warbz, 20 December 2007 - 18:15.

[Waris]

The effects are good, just not the reflections. The front wheels are cut up.

[Warbz]

[Alias]

Not bad, border reduces the quality though, especially those corners.
Overall 7.5/10.

[TheDR]

Shame about the border, give it a border like the one in you sig and it would look amazing.

[Wizard]

I reckon a cine border would work nicely mate. 3px black on top & bottom. Good effort on this sig though. 8/10 although a bit too monotone for my personal taste.

[Warbz]

render:


My sig:


I think, one of better ones. Yeah? =D

[Wizard]

Warbz, on 24 Dec 2007, 16:16, said:

I think, one of better ones. Yeah? =D

Your work is improving mate. Well done. I do want to make some criticisms but I don't want you to feel bad

1/ The render colour and the bg colour aren't mixing well. I know that the render is primarily brown, not the best to work with, but they don't sit together as nicely as they could do. Next time perhaps eye drop the most predominate colour from your render to set the bg tone.
2/ At the very bottom of the render is the tracer which is very bright green. I am guessing this is because maybe you have one layer set to colour/linear dodge? It makes it too green and red & green don't usually go.
3/ Great work with the fractals/c4ds. But the very thin lines on the left don't fit perfectly. Perhaps erase these? The flow is spoilt with them in.
4/ The render is too over exposed
5/ I can't say the font fits tbh, not bad, but I think perhaps could be better.

Sorry that I keep critising your work my friend. I am not being negative on you, just hope that what I say can help you make sigs. Instead of replacing the render try adding a red to black gradient map set to soft light at about 75% and lets see what happens then.

Merry Xmas mate

- W

PS 7.9/10

Edited by Wizard, 26 December 2007 - 01:06.

[Warbz]

Just opened up photoshop again, after having only used it for vector images for a few weeks I thought I'd try something new.
I will have another go, probably Friday morning, in order to get an entry done for the SoTW.
-Points to sig-

[Wizard]

Pen tool?

[Warbz]

Nah, it's a load of custom brushes I seem to have picked up somehwere along with a colour overlay and the female silhouette is actually a letter from the font 'Subve'.

I try to avoid the pen tool, it does strange things and I don't quite understand it.

[Warbz]

MOAR ANIMATION!
(in moderation )

EDIT:
-_-;;

Ignore the stupid white bits.

Edited by EpicWarbz, 20 October 2008 - 11:09.

[Camille]

i'd say... remove the white bits.

[Futschki]

apart from the white bits () the font is illedgible and the border needs fixing ... the background is so dark and so is the render ... that one needs lots of fixing ...

[Crazykenny]

Looks awesome Warbz

[BeefJeRKy]

Is that Cmdr Fuller from RA3? Too much detail lost in the dark.

[Warbz]

My SoTW entry.

[Warbz]

Edited. Can't enter it though. D:

[Ellipsis]

I rather like this one, since it has more taste. It just comes alive and catches your eye. And did you use Bob's border?

[Warbz]

...no

[Slightly Wonky Robob]

EpicWarbz, on 26 Oct 2008, 13:14, said:

...no

Indeed, mine's 2px from the edge

[Warbz]

2px eh?

Rightio...

[Warbz]

Latest, thoughts? additions? anything I should remove next time?

[TheDR]

It seems to have too much red and it is bit too clustered with no main focal points.
Tho it looks like it has some nice effects on it.

I would change it by taking away some of the red, moving the text and choosing just one of the renders for it.

[Warbz]

Same as last one but border border, i think. lol