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Started By smooder, Dec 07 2007 18:56

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#26 Whitey

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 04:45

I wouldn't mind gang warfare.

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 04:50

That's what I was thinking, :)!!
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Posted 14 December 2007 - 10:46

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So as you can see I propose a deep, action, spiritual, sci fi thing that covers all bases. I hope I havent been too confusing and the aliens havent put you off. I'd say the plan was moar spiritual than sci fi anyway.


I say yes. Maybe, instead of aliens, we could use some kind of totalitarian human government. Combat would be included, but through war, not GT-frikin-A.
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Posted 14 December 2007 - 15:26

I want to execute people :(
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#30 smooder

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 16:31

Combat would be included. They otherthrow the worlds governments... how else can that be done??

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 20:15

Now that you are still brainstorming, might I attend to this too? :)
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#32 smooder

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 20:22

Certainly :)

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Posted 14 December 2007 - 21:46

Gangs, it's all about gangs!

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 00:26

Gangs would be in my suggestion.

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 00:49

ill join if u want me

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#36 Whitey

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 04:55

Gang warfare. No aliens and crap. That's what I think. But this coming from a mind like my own...

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 13:42

My origional plan was to have angels instead of aliens. Sound better?

So its very spirtitual now.

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 16:06

yea, can i join in?

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 16:36

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#40 Whitey

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 16:46

No, angels would NOT make it better.

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#41 smooder

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 18:56

We need to make some progress nows. Everyone who wants to do my idea a bit modified say yeah.

The 17 year old will be a new prophet from God in the story methinks. Not aliens anymoar.

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 20:16

A bit too religious for my liking. Besides, this is a collective story, and some people might find it offensive.
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Posted 15 December 2007 - 20:59

I really dont understand how people would find it offensive but more ideas needed then :P

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 22:55

gang warfare methinks?

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 22:59

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gang warfare methinks?



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Posted 16 December 2007 - 12:00

Okay gang warfare. There needs to be Italians, Japs, Blacks and an emerging mafia gang, maybe a breakaway from the Itais?
Its always nice to see the italians shooting the fuck out of people in their cool way, occasionally saying an italian word.

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Posted 16 December 2007 - 14:41

Yes, finally some gangs!!
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Posted 16 December 2007 - 15:57

Plot, plot I say! We need plan the conflict, lay out the sides, the characters, details of the surroundings. Oh, also the time: will it be contemporary, historical, futuristic, alternate-history? How much realism will be involved? Will there be any mature stuff?

I think all contributors should make an idea sketch, a synopsis of sort. I would do it now, but I'm too busy and important :P
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Posted 16 December 2007 - 16:23

Im suggesting if ure gonna make gang warfare how about making it John Woo style?
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Posted 16 December 2007 - 16:55

I was thinking more GTA style, honestly. I don't mind whatever kind of sequences take place so long as there is no magic or inhuman actions/other worldly things.

I nominate... CHICAGO for the setting. Chicago, 2015.
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