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Red Storm II
Started By General Kirkov, Aug 26 2008 18:39
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 18:39
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 19:12
Nice, but is it me or is the text huge? I have to shrink everything.
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 19:25
The text is normal click view on your browser tab and set it to normal.
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 20:05
The text is indeed huge, I'll have a read later and comment.
Edit: I suspect it the red underline he used.
Edit: I suspect it the red underline he used.
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 00:33
Played around with it is the text still wierd?
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 01:44
General Kirkov, on 26 Aug 2008, 20:33, said:
Played around with it is the text still wierd?
It's plain regular text now if that's what you wanted.
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Posted 29 August 2008 - 14:14
EWOKS RAWR *Radio Check*
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 17:05
Oh Noes Storm Troopers!
Edited by General Kirkov, 26 July 2009 - 14:57.
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Posted 02 September 2008 - 02:33
You've been busy. :wink:
As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.
As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.
Thanks for the sig and avatar, 'Dr.
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Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:46
Ellipsis, on 1 Sep 2008, 22:33, said:
You've been busy. :wink:
As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.
As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.
Oh I just finished the entire story last week, this was written in Octobrer 2007 stay tunned for the next installment!
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Posted 05 September 2008 - 14:15
Bow-Chicka-Bow-Wow
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Posted 08 September 2008 - 12:04
Monkeys!
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Posted 10 September 2008 - 12:00
Swoosh swoosh
Edited by General Kirkov, 26 July 2009 - 15:00.
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Posted 12 September 2008 - 17:52
UP!
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Posted 15 September 2008 - 11:55
Down!
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Posted 15 September 2008 - 12:00
Ah... it would appear you have posted the same chapter twice, I'm afraid.
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Posted 15 September 2008 - 13:54
MDK
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Posted 17 September 2008 - 13:51
OS-3
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Posted 20 September 2008 - 02:53
What?
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 14:02
You're still reading this?
Edited by General Kirkov, 26 July 2009 - 15:04.
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 17:36
Wow you must be patient as hell!
Edited by General Kirkov, 26 July 2009 - 15:05.
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 19:57
Your story's great and I like it but other than that I have nothing else to add (not very good at critiquing) so I didn't really feel the need to post.
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 20:02
I like it when people post it lets me know that people are reading it
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 23:36
I'm in pretty much the same basket as Sharpnessism; I've been reading it with interest but I'd like to hold off on comments and critiques until the end, where I have a full story to go on. Hope you don't mind. Anyway, looking forward to the next instalment...
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Posted 25 September 2008 - 00:20
Only a few chapters left and a conclusion/epilogue.
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