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[Mr. Mylo]

well, it should be irony but meh...

Edited by MYLO, 31 May 2007 - 12:52.

[Sgt. Nuker]

Dream It All Away

She's holding on by a string
dangling inside the hourglass
She'll never know
the pain we're in

She's the one we love
whom we want to stay
she'll never know
how long we were there

She'll never know
I prayed for her
from the chair beside her bed
...last night

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Regards,

Nuker

[Lord Atlantis]

Nuker... the simplicity of the poem is amazing and the emotional meaning is powerful. Excellant job yet again.

[Ektufall]

Quite astonishing emotional picture it has.. I like it Nuker !

[Mr. Mylo]

yeah very nice... want to see more of yours

[Sgt. Nuker]

Ask and ye shall receive.

Mondays Were Made For The Brave, But Thursdays Were Made For Sleeping

They tell me I'm not good enough
with their eyes (so silent I hear them in my dreams)
Can't let it show
They musn't know
I'm breaking on this inside (I lay broken in the street)

I've come this far
just to turn around
Failure was my daily prayer
now this void has filled my head
no room for feelings

Run away, run away
Dance the night asleep
Travel far and wide
and never leave your favorite chair
Sing me all the way to Neverland

I'll find a Cloud to lay my head, don't worry for me
If I fall, at least I'll be dreaming
and just as confused as ever



"The last time I saw her, she was standing above me, watching me fall from the grace I never deserved. I miss the tyme I spent in her arms, so warm, yet so frail."

[Sgt. Nuker]

I know it's a double post, but I needed to write this:

Not Like This

It's just another day
Take a trip
Walk the line
Fall in perfect time

This time won't be the last
This time won't be my first
I've fallen for a curse (that's sure to be the death of me)
My heart aches
and my heart breaks
but you don't see me
crying in the window (the shadows, they comfort me)
No I can't bare
to see the world
and know that they might see
what's up my sleeve

Hold me close
Hold me tight
Refill the space within
Give me the life I never had
I never wanted this.......

But it's just another day
with one more heart ache
one more broken dream
Every face I see
walking here
walking there
They all look the same

Hold me close
Hold me tight
Refill the space within
Give me life
Give me breath
Take me to a place I've never been

Because it's just another day...
Just another heart ache......
One more broken dream....
They all look the same...

'Cuz I never wanted this.......


To end............

[Athena]

That's beautiful and sad..

You are really a good poem writer in my opinion.

[Lord Atlantis]

I've already told you what I think and I will tell you again: You have an excellant way of expressing your emotions through writing. I really like your latest poem.

[Sgt. Nuker]

Written for my Grandfather, who's riding that big train in the sky

Requiem

No life within
No life without
Linen sheets can't hide the truth
Listless shape trapped beneath
Sullen faces dancing in the sunlight
The temporary is forever

Knowing you live the good life
Knowing I've failed to touch you
Now someone else is mourning
Someone else is grieving
Sign your life away
Bury your loved one in paper
It's a necessary evil
that we're not born to take

Take this life from me
Shards of glass echo on the floor
A new beginning
for an old friend
Robes of white have never felt so good

Goodbye old friend
Walk this path 'til you reach the end
I'll be there soon

R.I.P. Charles E. Bass (1920-2007)

Edited by Major Nuker, 20 June 2007 - 04:05.

[Dauth]

A powerful poem, not really much more i can say

[Lord Atlantis]

Dauth sums up my thoughts. Very nice and powerful poem.

[Sgt. Nuker]

One...

Is to think
Is to be
Is to have

Just a thought
an inkling
a momentary glimpse
into being whole

But being without...

Life worth living

such a fabled tale

Push it all away
and sit in


solitude


Isn't one
something we're

all supposed to be

...floating
in cloudy murky water

bath water
drawn for


..........ONE

[CodeCat]

To give individual work some more exposure and to prevent all work from getting piled up in one big topic, I'm closing this. Please leave any complaints at the reception, thank you.