en-5 artworks
Pav:3d 29 Dec 2010
Looking good, tho Id suggest with the sketch lines get rid of them or replace them with more solid, bold lines
TheDR 30 Dec 2010
It looks nice, the pop out works really well. However the background seems a bit off, the red doesn't fit on the left and the right could do with some texture or colour to make it less black. Otherwise i think it's really good, the size is just right and the shape of the border works really well
n5p29 30 Dec 2010
Pav:3d, on 30 Dec 2010, 6:53, said:
Looking good, tho Id suggest with the sketch lines get rid of them or replace them with more solid, bold lines
well, yeah. this is my weak point. I cannot replace the rugged sketch lines with more solid lines. I'm too used to draw with such lines, and have no idea how to replace them correctly.
TheDR, on 30 Dec 2010, 7:34, said:
However the background seems a bit off, the red doesn't fit on the left and the right could do with some texture or colour to make it less black.
actually it's already like that from the original colored picture. I'm recycling the background of this pic: http://media.moddb.com/images/mods/1/13/12...terconcept3.jpg
anyway I'll try what I can do to improve the background.
Wizard 17 Feb 2011
The nose looks like it could use a little improvement and the props look like they belong on a demonic Landraider, but otherwise a very nice model
Edit: that said you should probably think about not having a completelyflat horizontal wing span. Feels odd. Angle them downwards slightly?
Edited by Wizard, 17 February 2011 - 10:29.
Edit: that said you should probably think about not having a completely
Edited by Wizard, 17 February 2011 - 10:29.
Destiny 17 Feb 2011
SMOOTHING! You should move the outer engines more...out. It looks kinda cramped when they're so much space outside...
n5p29 17 Feb 2011
yeah, maybe the nose looks bland because of oversmoothing.
about the propellers, I'm too lazy to make the details. the props are being reworked.
for the flat wings, funny that I'm following the blueprint much. it's already like that. or maybe because the render view it looks horizontal flat.
about the propellers, I'm too lazy to make the details. the props are being reworked.
for the flat wings, funny that I'm following the blueprint much. it's already like that. or maybe because the render view it looks horizontal flat.
n5p29 16 Aug 2011
Wizard 16 Aug 2011
n5p29 16 Aug 2011
Sgt. Nuker 29 Aug 2011
I wonder how Juhziz stole a Wartrakk from the Orkz.....and survived! D: