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[Pav:3d]

Looking good, tho Id suggest with the sketch lines get rid of them or replace them with more solid, bold lines

[TheDR]

It looks nice, the pop out works really well. However the background seems a bit off, the red doesn't fit on the left and the right could do with some texture or colour to make it less black. Otherwise i think it's really good, the size is just right and the shape of the border works really well

[n5p29]

Pav:3d, on 30 Dec 2010, 6:53, said:

Looking good, tho Id suggest with the sketch lines get rid of them or replace them with more solid, bold lines

well, yeah. this is my weak point. I cannot replace the rugged sketch lines with more solid lines. I'm too used to draw with such lines, and have no idea how to replace them correctly.

TheDR, on 30 Dec 2010, 7:34, said:

However the background seems a bit off, the red doesn't fit on the left and the right could do with some texture or colour to make it less black.

actually it's already like that from the original colored picture. I'm recycling the background of this pic: http://media.moddb.com/images/mods/1/13/12...terconcept3.jpg
anyway I'll try what I can do to improve the background.

[n5p29]

yay, my first airplane model!
based on KJ-2000 with some alteration.

[Wizard]

The nose looks like it could use a little improvement and the props look like they belong on a demonic Landraider, but otherwise a very nice model

Edit: that said you should probably think about not having a completely flat horizontal wing span. Feels odd. Angle them downwards slightly?

Edited by Wizard, 17 February 2011 - 10:29.

[Destiny]

SMOOTHING! You should move the outer engines more...out. It looks kinda cramped when they're so much space outside...

[n5p29]

yeah, maybe the nose looks bland because of oversmoothing.
about the propellers, I'm too lazy to make the details. the props are being reworked.

for the flat wings, funny that I'm following the blueprint much. it's already like that. or maybe because the render view it looks horizontal flat.

[n5p29]

skinned it using ZH Cargo Plane texture.

[n5p29]

alternative fixed paladin cameo.




and something I made when I was bored

now to skin it.

Edited by n5p29, 16 August 2011 - 10:41.

[Wizard]

n5p29, on 16 August 2011 - 10:27, said:

and something I made when I was bored

Red ones go fasta??

[n5p29]

Wizard, on 16 August 2011 - 10:34, said:

n5p29, on 16 August 2011 - 10:27, said:

and something I made when I was bored
*pic*

Red ones go fasta??

Warboss Juhziz approves

[Sgt. Nuker]

I wonder how Juhziz stole a Wartrakk from the Orkz.....and survived! D: