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Posted 01 April 2010 - 13:46

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Posted 27 April 2010 - 05:58

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Posted 27 April 2010 - 07:31

Personally, the reason for which I don't comment your poetry is simple : English poetry sounds weird to me, I prefer the French one where there plenty of rhymes and a nice tone when you read them. Add that to the fact that I'm not good enough in English to grasp the full meaning of your poetry and to read between it's lines, and you'll understand that I don't find anything to comment D:

PS : How is this kind of poetry called? I've never seen a similar form...

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Posted 27 April 2010 - 07:52

View PostArgetlam, on 27 Apr 2010, 8:31, said:

Personally, the reason for which I don't comment your poetry is simple : English poetry sounds weird to me, I prefer the French one where there plenty of rhymes and a nice tone when you read them. Add that to the fact that I'm not good enough in English to grasp the full meaning of your poetry and to read between it's lines, and you'll understand that I don't find anything to comment D:

PS : How is this kind of poetry called? I've never seen a similar form...


now I feel really bad because I made it sound like I was frustrated when I'm not, I was just musing over it D: sorry!
I'm not sure what it would be called... I think the style is something I adopted from the poetry workshopping forums I visit - the regulars tend to write in styles somewhat like this.
I never really notice the style I write in, honestly - I just edit the way I consider correct.
Thanks for commenting either way. :3
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Posted 12 June 2010 - 23:25

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