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Concerned Citizen: End of the World

Started By TheDR, Apr 09 2011 23:58

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#1 TheDR

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Posted 09 April 2011 - 23:58



Or watch it on Youtube

Warning, the upload has broken near the end, I have place an annotation to stop you from hear it and I apologize greatly.

My latest project for Uni work, came out really well :duh:

A big thanks to Chyros for helping out!

Edited by TheDR, 10 April 2011 - 09:02.

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#2 CJ

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 00:28

I didn't watch it entirely yet but

YOU BOUNCE TOO MUCH!

EDIT :
I was going to say this is great, but then the ear rape at 11 minutes happened. Not cool man, not cool.

Edited by CJ, 10 April 2011 - 00:41.

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I bet I could program an internet

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 02:57

End of your video's static and broken, doc.

Great video though.
You almost did, didn't you?

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 05:26

I love Chyros's urge to purge grain :duh:




The ending was for extraterrestrial beings. I understood :cool:
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 05:56

Yeah I wasn't very serious throughout the clips :duh: . The bolloxed up part is rather horrible, but otherwise it's turned out well, and I love the animations :cool: . But PLEASE don't move around so much, you're making me nervous 8| .
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#6 Destiny

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 06:49

What's wrong with Doc? :duh:
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 08:16

You spelt Chyros wrong in the Youtube description. :duh:

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 08:33

I think Chyros needs a nicer sounding mic.
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#9 TheDR

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 08:56

Sorry about the ending, I have no idea why that happened D:
I think I will take it down soon until I manage to convert in from the stupid mac format it is in, it's really annoying.

Anyway thanks for the positive comments, it has taken ages to make.

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 10:36

Good job with the vid doc. I like it a lot.

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 12:58

Those eyebrows deserve an award or something.

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 13:16

It's a nice video but your delivery could use some work and you sure did like bopping around in the first minute. The other points have already been noted.
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 13:51

I liked the video. Is this the first in a series? I'd like to see more. Also nice mouse :duh:

I would offer some constructive criticism but I'd say everything that needed to be said was said. I guess you should sometimes speak more clearly as I felt you mumbled a line or two.
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#14 TheDR

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Posted 10 April 2011 - 14:02

Well Scope, its a hypothetical series but if I get some free time in the future I will consider making more as the reception has been quite positive. Also sidewinder Mouse and keyboard ftw :duh:

If I was to do it again I would definitely spend more time practicing the lines, deadlines can be mean things.
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 18:07

View PostAlias, on 10 Apr 2011, 10:16, said:

You spelt Chyros wrong in the Youtube description. :duh:
OH MY GOD D:

I swear he's doing it to tease me :cool: .


View Postdeltaepsilon, on 10 Apr 2011, 10:33, said:

I think Chyros needs a nicer sounding mic.
It works better in Skype I think. I just used Windows Sound Recorder 8| .
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 03:29

Having watched a bit of it, I can say that I do like the way it was filmed. Having Chyros as "our scientist" was a brilliant bit, but not a whole lot of detail was given as to why the whole doomsday asteroid was a popular theory for the end of the earth. With a film of 11 minutes, I believe there should have been some breathing room for that.

Doc, you remind me of Mike Myers when he played Austin Powers. Your mannerisms mirrored his quite a bit. Not saying that's such a bad thing, but the whole bobbing and weaving about was a bit....distracting.

In passing: It's not America's fault for getting hit by a meteorite. :xD:
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 10:13

Does Doc really bob about so much? O.o
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 10:14

Not really, I think it's just Americans are far more static than most other cultures.

I think his visual presentation was fine and it was rather the verbal presentation that was lacking.

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Posted 11 April 2011 - 10:41

View PostDestiny, on 11 Apr 2011, 11:13, said:

Does Doc really bob about so much? O.o


In the first minute he bobs like crazy ^, then he cools down.
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 10:44

Really? It seemed more like the uneven ground/stuff on the floor in the building Doc and the cameraman were walking over.
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 22:02

Nah TheDr was shaking his head a little excessively at the start :xD:
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Posted 11 April 2011 - 22:58

I wouldnt be suprised to turn on the tv and see you presenting the gadget show or something, you have that kind of voice/personality :xD: Tho your mannerisms are slightly exaggerated imo and like Nuka said they can be distracting. Cant believe thats Chyros, he sounds so British :P

A well put together vid doc.

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