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I thought of why not write some background story for that thing im working on secretly. Anyway since im not really good in English I would like to ask if you guys could help me correcting grammar mistakes and such things and maybe contribute to the story
anyways here is part one I guess.
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Its the year 2467 mankind already know how to colonize planets and do some basics terraforming like making an atmosphere and things. The goverments of all planets are under the control of the Cvillian arm of ACOR (ACOR stands for Allied Colonies and Outer Rim).
There are 3 kinds of Colonies the inner colonies, outer colonies and the outer rim.
The inner colonies are those who got first colonized and are fully terraformed. The infrastructure is fully deployed and they house millions of colonist. They play an important role in goverment decisions that have a colony wide effect
The outer colonies are those that got colonized the last and are farther away from Earth. They are not fully terraformed and the infrastructure is not fully deployed yet. These colonies only house something bout 100.000-500.000.000 colonists or more depends on the size of the planet. Law is kind of present mostly in citys.
And then there are the Outer Rim Colonies. New and unexplored space and so far away from the inner colonies that there is no function law system or goverment. What to say about them ... its like the wild west full of Pirates, Bandits, independet mining corporations with there own private army and colonist who try there luck of making the big money. But there are some safe spots and those are the remote facilitys of the Army. No bandit is dumb enough to attack an army outpost since they will fire back with everything they have. So its a save but expensive spot to settle down since you have to pay high taxes at least it is safe..
and last but not least unexplored space its just unexplored.
Current Political Situation:
The Outer Colonies Population is unhappy with the goverments plan to support the inner colonies more than their own Outer Colonies. Heavy Riots arise because of this plan. Because of the low present of Police Forces and Military, the Outer Colonies are powerless against the heavy riots in the cities.
Since there is a Rebel group founded named Revolutionary Front of the Outer Colonies short: RFOC.
Responsible for more than thousands attacks and thousands of dead colonist. The reaction of the colonies didnt wait for long. The ACOR approved the Operation CASTLEBRAVO. Goal of this operation is to eliminate or capture all rebel forces.
There are 3 kinds of Colonies the inner colonies, outer colonies and the outer rim.
The inner colonies are those who got first colonized and are fully terraformed. The infrastructure is fully deployed and they house millions of colonist. They play an important role in goverment decisions that have a colony wide effect
The outer colonies are those that got colonized the last and are farther away from Earth. They are not fully terraformed and the infrastructure is not fully deployed yet. These colonies only house something bout 100.000-500.000.000 colonists or more depends on the size of the planet. Law is kind of present mostly in citys.
And then there are the Outer Rim Colonies. New and unexplored space and so far away from the inner colonies that there is no function law system or goverment. What to say about them ... its like the wild west full of Pirates, Bandits, independet mining corporations with there own private army and colonist who try there luck of making the big money. But there are some safe spots and those are the remote facilitys of the Army. No bandit is dumb enough to attack an army outpost since they will fire back with everything they have. So its a save but expensive spot to settle down since you have to pay high taxes at least it is safe..
and last but not least unexplored space its just unexplored.
Current Political Situation:
The Outer Colonies Population is unhappy with the goverments plan to support the inner colonies more than their own Outer Colonies. Heavy Riots arise because of this plan. Because of the low present of Police Forces and Military, the Outer Colonies are powerless against the heavy riots in the cities.
Since there is a Rebel group founded named Revolutionary Front of the Outer Colonies short: RFOC.
Responsible for more than thousands attacks and thousands of dead colonist. The reaction of the colonies didnt wait for long. The ACOR approved the Operation CASTLEBRAVO. Goal of this operation is to eliminate or capture all rebel forces.
Edited by Bakelit, 25 June 2012 - 11:14.
