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[JoKeRSian]

This is my first model, and it's sorta crude
I'm Trying to rework the main body, but I think I'll prolly keep the wings
Suggestions on this and general modeling please?

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Edited by JoKeRSian, 12 June 2005 - 06:06.

[The_Hunter]

that's realy nice for a forst model dude :drunk:

the only thing that i would suggest is to make the wings look more aerodynamic and smooth some parts

[AKA_Slayer]

It's good for a first model.
I suggest to make the wings a little longer and smooth the body more.

[Whitey]

wings arent flat on front X_X lol

i think move the top faces on wings forward, same polies, better lookin

[SoulReaver]

Not that bad for a first model but you need to improve to get to a decent level, I suggest you make the wings and the body a single object and to make the wings sloped ath the front.

[retry_1]

good start but needs more detail i happen to have a matchbox one in my hand and i noticed it had a lardge spine down the middle any way good werk.

[Whitey]

ah but i was at someplace and actually touched 1

it was hot cuz it was black and it was in bright sun i was like OUCH

but neway, the spine, yes

also mayb smooth the front a bit and DONT MAKE FLAT FRONTS TO WINGS...!

[JoKeRSian]

the spine is there, it's just at a bad angle. When exported the file from renx as a WD3, it messed with some of the work *shrugs* like i said, i'm re building the main body and will touch up the wings once i get a break from work. Thanx for the input.

anyway...i was looking at one i have and thought that it would be cool in the game...*shrugs* it's the same size as an the aruora bomber. dunno though...need's alot of work till it's game ready

Edited by JoKeRSian, 19 June 2005 - 02:09.