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#1 moab_there_butt

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Posted 30 June 2006 - 05:43

ok, this is an R&B song. for the back ground music think mario winans "i got a crush on you" the words in () are the words spoken by a back ground voice.

for the most part imagine mario winans singing these lyrics. im trying to find somthing like a kareeokee song of "i got a crush on you" so i can add my lyrics in and sing it. what are your thoughts, does every thing at least look decent.

also feel free to try and record your self singing it. just make sure you send me a copy of what it sounds like k.



MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU MY BABY

by Roy Durham

I wrote a song for you
No kidding, my feelings are getting strong for you
I’ve got a crush on you and (you know it’s true)
Every time I stand next to you
my heart throbs for you.
this may get explicit but
I just can’t resist it.
I’ve got this ideal plan,
On how I can be your perfect man
I’m gonna love you with all my power
Shower you in gifts and flowers
I really want you to be my baby
I want to make you my sweet lady (did I tell you that I love you?)
Scratch that, I want you to be my sexy lady
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[Chorus]

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.
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My world would be perfect If it where meant to be
To think that you actually had the same feelings for me
If I had the chance id give you the moon
Just so you’ll be my boo
You say your love can’t be bought with gifts
Well that’s cool, ill just win you over with this (my heart)
Like Niagara Falls, my love for you just over flows
But you already know
And if that’s not enough
Let me reassure you this isn’t a bluff (my love is for real)
A pretty little woman like you deserves to have a song written about you
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[Chorus]

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.

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I can see us now, it’s a Sunday night (it’s a nice night)
And the stars fill the sky
And your sitting by my side
With all confidence you know you found Mr. Right (and your Misses Right)
This is out of sight
Let’s not fight, instead tonight
Just relax and let me show you my love (you will never regret it, I promise)

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[Chorus]

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.

My perfect lady, will you be my baby?
I need to know if you feel the way I feel.
If so will you be my baby, oooh my sweet lady.

[Music fades out]
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#2 Sgt. Nuker

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Posted 01 July 2006 - 00:20

I have an idea of what the song sounds like, but I'm not completely sure. The lyrics your wrote look awesome :D . How long did that take you? Based on my experience of writing poems/songs, it could have taken you anywhere from 10 minutes to an hour. I'm not much for the R & B, but you did an awesome job Moab.


My best,

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