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#51
Posted 19 October 2007 - 10:18
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#52
Posted 28 October 2007 - 19:35
'Twas not you
who saw me walking
'Twas not I
that saw you stammer
In all of this
'twas not us who mattered
So I'll take a mile
and you send a smile
At the end of the day
the rain will still fall
Unless you run my mile
and I wear your smile
Today's an odd day
for sitting still
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#53
Posted 28 October 2007 - 20:19
i have another...i understand it.
thank you
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People's Liberation Army, on 12 Jul 2007, 21:21, said:
*Sat Scan reveals 1 Gatling tank*
"Will your defences hold this time?"
#55
Posted 29 October 2007 - 09:42
It's a shame you only write when unhappy, I would love to see a poem with your mood elated.
#56
Posted 29 October 2007 - 11:10
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What he said!
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Thanks for the sig and avatar, 'Dr.
#57
Posted 29 October 2007 - 15:51
@Dauth: From the comment about my most recent work, I believe that's my best piece to date, simple as it may be. Thank you.
Regards,
Nuker
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#58
Posted 02 November 2007 - 03:34
Nicely written Nuker.
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- E.V.E.
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#59
Posted 04 November 2007 - 19:04
Wish me luck
as you watch me fall
Forever have these wordless taunts
and motionless actions
forbade a pleasant night's sleep
Living in a dream
and yet to some degree
a walking nightmare
have I been fed
Now as the music flows
and rocks me to parts unknown
I've balanced my conscience
and tipped the past
in favor of playing with the storm
You scribe words
on ironed out trees
but I paint my soul
on the world's playground
It's nothing black and blue
but negative space
and everything together
So here's to you
my truly inescapable
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#61
Posted 05 November 2007 - 09:52
You can see this being read out to as the narration to a film. I don't quite know what film however.
#62
Posted 05 November 2007 - 20:22
realy realy great work man!
-{Aston Martin 4ever}-
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#63
Posted 09 November 2007 - 21:47
Don't mock the nonsense
just sing the chorus
Nobody likes hot air resonance
Walk (down) the line
and keep perfect time
a midnight jaunt
from a clock once chimed
Ribbon-tailed fantasy
meets purple-faced reality
Psycho-tripping analyst
Thinking of brown bags and apathy
Brown bags and apathy
(our) Apathy makes a stirred pot cold
A beggar's truth
will guide you home
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#64
Posted 10 November 2007 - 01:47
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will guide you home
I can't say why but I find that line incredibly sublime.
*salutes* Major Nuker the Majestic Noter
Edited by Wizardofnoz, 10 November 2007 - 01:47.
#65
Posted 10 November 2007 - 11:02
#66
Posted 10 November 2007 - 16:02
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In a bit of rare inspiration, I've come up with one more poem. 'Twas not intended, but the idea flickered long enough for me to take hold.
Dismantled Vision
These words you've thrown at me
have drawn black lines
These stains I've sown
have painted black souls
and now these words I script
have tainted my eyes shut
(live in constant dream)
.......Come quickly.....
....my immortal
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#68
Posted 10 November 2007 - 19:11
But your newest poem... I really don't exactly know what feeling its trying to bring across. But all I know is that it has something to it... something that at the moment I can't see.
#69
Posted 10 November 2007 - 19:42
Like you have a nack for these verses, and they would be really good meaningful stuff in songs as well.
If you can play an instrument and sing at the same time, I'd pay to watch you
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#70
Posted 10 November 2007 - 21:36
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This is not to say that I don't have a general sound of a song playing in my head when I write. Some of my poems may look complete, but because they aren't put to music, I just feel they're a little unfinished.
@Nidmeister: If you want to use one of my poems for a song, go ahead. Just let me know which one, or I can even suggest one to you. If you do use one, please give me due credit.
@Z Mann: I have thought of publishing some of my works, but I haven't as of yet. To be very honest, I wouldn't know where to start or who to go to, to even get them noticed to get published.
Thanks everyone for your comments. Your kind words are what keep me posting my heartfelt verses.
Kind regards,
Nuker
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#71
Posted 10 November 2007 - 22:34
She has the older version of this book http://www.amazon.com/Writers-Artists-Year...3970&sr=8-1 and it may be of use to you, also try to reference section at your local library, that may show some good ideas.
#72
Posted 11 November 2007 - 11:58
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I believe an artist's work is never truly finished. There is always that little gap to match perfection; at least, such is the case with me and my (few) works.
BTW Music is my main inspiration too
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Try and get in touch with other young, unexperienced artists. I have a friend who is getting her first novel published by the end of the year. I can talk to her if you would like to.
EDIT: Typo-mania
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Edited by Z_mann, 11 November 2007 - 11:59.
#73
Posted 12 November 2007 - 22:53
Major Nuker, on 10 Nov 2007, 21:36, said:
Ahh, I couldn't do that, I don't like the idea of artists not using their own material. It would be hypocritical of me to take any of your writings.
no offense intended, I'd much prefer to use my own material, it gives me a sense of, not exactly honour but whole credit on completion of a song.
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#74
Posted 15 November 2007 - 22:23
A voice
A voice
The tiny little voice
sings in my head
Tells me things to think
and whether I may weep
for the spilt milk
upon her head
Today
Today
the mind it plays tricks
pick up sticks
and walk away
Come again
another day
Just go wandering
just head home
Which way to go
with everywhere to head
So many ways to turn
where the blacktop ends
Always forget
Never remember
Always remember
Never forget
'tis reversed etiquette
and required reflex
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#75
Posted 16 November 2007 - 09:16
It's a shame to read of someone trapped in their own head, it would seem you have a lot on your mind.
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