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Started By General Kirkov, Aug 26 2008 18:39

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#1 General Kirkov

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Posted 26 August 2008 - 18:39

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Posted 26 August 2008 - 19:12

Nice, but is it me or is the text huge? I have to shrink everything.
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 19:25

The text is normal click view on your browser tab and set it to normal.
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 20:05

The text is indeed huge, I'll have a read later and comment.

Edit: I suspect it the red underline he used.

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#5 General Kirkov

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Posted 27 August 2008 - 00:33

Played around with it is the text still wierd?
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 01:44

 General Kirkov, on 26 Aug 2008, 20:33, said:

Played around with it is the text still wierd?


It's plain regular text now if that's what you wanted.
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Posted 29 August 2008 - 14:14

EWOKS RAWR *Radio Check*

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Posted 01 September 2008 - 17:05

Oh Noes Storm Troopers!

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Posted 02 September 2008 - 02:33

You've been busy. :wink:

As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.
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#10 General Kirkov

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Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:46

 Ellipsis, on 1 Sep 2008, 22:33, said:

You've been busy. :wink:

As always, a quality of work has emerged within your posts.



Oh I just finished the entire story last week, this was written in Octobrer 2007 stay tunned for the next installment! :P
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Posted 05 September 2008 - 14:15

Bow-Chicka-Bow-Wow

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Posted 08 September 2008 - 12:04

Monkeys!

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Posted 10 September 2008 - 12:00

Swoosh swoosh

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Posted 12 September 2008 - 17:52

UP!

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Posted 15 September 2008 - 11:55

Down!

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Posted 15 September 2008 - 12:00

Ah... it would appear you have posted the same chapter twice, I'm afraid.

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Posted 15 September 2008 - 13:54

MDK

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Posted 17 September 2008 - 13:51

OS-3

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 02:53

What?

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Posted 22 September 2008 - 14:02

You're still reading this?

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Posted 24 September 2008 - 17:36

Wow you must be patient as hell!

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Posted 24 September 2008 - 19:57

Your story's great and I like it but other than that I have nothing else to add (not very good at critiquing) so I didn't really feel the need to post.
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 20:02

I like it when people post it lets me know that people are reading it :P
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Posted 24 September 2008 - 23:36

I'm in pretty much the same basket as Sharpnessism; I've been reading it with interest but I'd like to hold off on comments and critiques until the end, where I have a full story to go on. Hope you don't mind. Anyway, looking forward to the next instalment...

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#25 General Kirkov

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Posted 25 September 2008 - 00:20

Only a few chapters left and a conclusion/epilogue.
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