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AZZKIKR
02 Apr 2009
the 2 "cannons" are funnels that cause a corrosive foam to gush out. foam is contained in containers.
AZZKIKR
25 Apr 2009
double post.

something i made to replace the olga which i deemed do not fit
it is armed with 2 203mm guns

something i made to replace the olga which i deemed do not fit
it is armed with 2 203mm guns
Wizard
05 May 2009
Would be nice to see it from an angle that isn't profile. But it looks ok if a tiny bit on the long side. Perhaps make it a touch more bulbous than slender.
Alias
05 May 2009
The cannon turrets need to be way rounder, it looks like it'll collide into the balloon if it rotates too far.
You may also want to add tail fins.
You may also want to add tail fins.
Wizard
06 May 2009
WHOA JESAS!!!
That is one hella busy looking model you have there. Is it supposed to be an elongated Death Star? I'd suggest removing some turrets/guns, get rid of the supports (leave it to the skin) and generally make it a but plainer. It is way to cluttered right now and looks like a lumpy balloon animal more than an airship.
Edited by Wizard, 06 May 2009 - 13:36.
That is one hella busy looking model you have there. Is it supposed to be an elongated Death Star? I'd suggest removing some turrets/guns, get rid of the supports (leave it to the skin) and generally make it a but plainer. It is way to cluttered right now and looks like a lumpy balloon animal more than an airship.
Edited by Wizard, 06 May 2009 - 13:36.
BeefJeRKy
06 May 2009
As Wiz said, it looks quite cluttered. Move those front cannons to where the bottom and make it a double tri-cannon config (i.e. 6 cannons total). Get rid of some of the props too. Finally, the tail needs a fix. Looks horribly out of place. The model has potential though.
Camille
06 May 2009
get some nicer renders 
(already posted that but that post miraculously vanquished...)

(already posted that but that post miraculously vanquished...)
WNxMastrefubu
06 May 2009
Camille
07 May 2009
Dauth
07 May 2009
I don't see any real need for the tail, Zeppelins turn due to the fans and float with the helium and lift props.
Removing some of the guns and perhaps doing a little more with the understructure, antenna or something to communicate with the ground etc.
Removing some of the guns and perhaps doing a little more with the understructure, antenna or something to communicate with the ground etc.
AZZKIKR
07 May 2009
i can't render with gmax. plus render suite seems to have a problem, must be due to my vista
Dauth
08 May 2009
Significant improvement, not perfect yet but a lot better.
I'd add some sort of lift prop on the front third or the stress will buckle any chassis you care to name. The helipad on top is a nice touch.
I'd add some sort of lift prop on the front third or the stress will buckle any chassis you care to name. The helipad on top is a nice touch.
pirate
08 May 2009
that looks a lot better
, I mean a helideck on a zeppelin, dude, what else can you want


BeefJeRKy
08 May 2009
pirate
08 May 2009
I would suggest keeping those props at the back as they are, adding new ones a bit more to the front would be better I think

AZZKIKR
09 May 2009
Lift propS? can't seem to find them on google. and model was based on RA2 concept
http://www.cnc-source.com/forums/index.php...si&img=5939
http://www.cnc-source.com/forums/index.php...si&img=5939
Lord Atlantis
09 May 2009
Propellors. Put some propellors in the front or middle instead of just keeping them in the back.
Dauth
09 May 2009
Make them a little bigger and I think you have a winner. You could also extend the box underneath the main balloon back a bit.