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[Gen.Kenobi]

Thanks for the feedback guys!

@Scope: Red Alertish xD I have no idea what you mean =P

TIGER TANK I Finished




1637 polys.

a MLRS.

[tank50us]

don't get me wrong, you've got some skill, but your attention to detail is lacking. Here's some reference photos of the Tiger to help out....





And for any more models you wish to do that are based on modern weapons, use The-Blueprints.om, it'll help you make good looking models, just going off of a photo doesn't always cut it.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thanks for the feedback.
A texture will do the job for the other details. Yes, i forget to add some, but i think it's good and it'll looks better when textured.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Kaiser VI Extremely Long Range Artilery



Spoter drone


Relay enemy positions in a long range =P

Both togheter, a danger combination.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Well, my lastest model is a Flame Anti Air unit for China.




The damm plane thing almost took out the threads...well i'll post a better render soon. 725 polys.

Feedback as ways, is welcome.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Chinese Flame Anti Air mk.2

Better version. 764 polys.

Chinese Artilery


Caveirão - BOPE


Tank Killer plane - no name yet. Suggestions are welcome

[Sgt. Nuker]

With regards to your Tiger I model, the mantel (place where the barrel meets the turret), is too rounded. On the Tiger, the mantel is more of a flat rectangle, rather than a dome.

The exhaust on the Chinese Flame Artillery looks a bit cheesy. Sorry for the lack of a better word, but at the moment I can think of no other way to describe it. I can suggest an alternative however. Rather than have the exhaust extend out so far, I suggest it be shortened almost to the bend.

As for name suggestions for the plane, what faction is receiving the plane? I only ask this because it might help me and others to generate a name.

[WNxMastrefubu]

nice models, no ideas for the plane name, but ill tell u if i do

[CommanderJB]

The flame anti-air looks much better now (or at least, I am afraid to say, relatively so, because I still can't bring myself to accept the idea). The artillery is good too; I have no criticisms. It's also nice to see the detail on the Caveirão, as it makes a fairly basic shape look interesting. The tank buster plane on the other hand I'm not keen on, sorry, mostly because of the lozenge shapes on the wings; while they might have a purpose I'm not aware of, they don't make sense visually or logically on first pass. The rest of the model is good, but those bulky boxes really ruin it for me.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thanks all for the feedback!

@Warboss Nooka: Once again i thank you for the feedback (it's very improtant to me). The exaust pipes of the Chinese Anti-air, were a probleman when i put them, but i'm sure, that with a good texture, it'll be better.

@JB: Yeah, the Tank Buster, named Flying Hammer (because of it's shape), is not that good, but i never was that good with airplanes, that's why i'm trying to improve.

A new model for ya:


China's SuperWeapon Candidate.

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 07 July 2009 - 14:30.

[Camille]

that doesn't look half bad actually...

work some more on the barrels i say.

[Gen.Kenobi]

k Thanks!



Blue tanky for ya.

[Camille]

you're getting there i feel it.

just get rid of that gruesome blue first.

as for the tank itself: you're allowed to use a six-sided cylinder for the barrel, it looks a thousand times better.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thanks Prey. For some reason i like teh 4 sided barrels. Make it feel kinda classic. =P



I'm praticsing some smooth and rouded turrets and tank modeling. Also adding a few details.
BTW it has 580 polys.

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 07 July 2009 - 21:52.

[Camille]

sorry but you're wrong. there's absolutely no way a four-sided barrel looks "classic". it just looks odd and wrong.

no get rid of that awful green grey renders for lime's sake.

[Sgt. Nuker]

The Chinese Super Weapon is EPIC. What is the planned projectile to be fired? At first glance it looks like 2 enormous jet engines angled out of a building, but common sense tells me I know better than to think that. I'm not sure what to think about the tanks, other than I like the blue one better than the green.

[Gen.Kenobi]

k Thanks budy!

About this Chinese Superweapon, you'll see, soon what it fires...

[Gen.Kenobi]

So...here goes my entry to C&C Society Walkers Contest:





2170 polys. Feedback is welcome

[Sgt. Nuker]

I'm not really sure of what to think of it to be brutally honest mate. The one thought that does come to mind is that I believe it would look more at home in the Star Wars universe, than in that of Command and Conquer.

[Gen.Kenobi]

k..i guess you didn't see C&C4 screens yet =P





629 polys =]

[Sgt. Nuker]

I have mate, but in spite of seeing the new screens, I'm still standing by my earlier conclusion.

[Dr. Knickers]

Warboss Nooka, on 11 Jul 2009, 10:43, said:

I'm not really sure of what to think of it to be brutally honest mate. The one thought that does come to mind is that I believe it would look more at home in the Star Wars universe, than in that of Command and Conquer.

Let's not insult Star Wars now....

Anywho, the barracks is pretty good overall. I think the front ends stick out too much though.

[Gen.Kenobi]

That walker was my personal critic: "EA don't know the difference betwen the AT-AT and Mamooth Mk2." Was my first reaction when i saw CnC4 pics.

But let's me dump a little more this thread.

Tan Barracks


Green Barracks


Green War Factory (ps, is 2 times bigger tham the barrcks)



These are for my personal project =P Soon i'll announce here at FS. It's on Moddb, i guess you guys already took a look threre.

[Ion Cannon!]

Those are decent models, you have improved extremely quickly, nice job.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Many thanks mate!