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#1 Mbob61

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 22:37

I have just recently got hold on 3 ds max and have been modeling for 4 days now.
id just like to post some stuff i have made in here. hopefully they will improve as time goes on

First is my first proper model i made. I will probably update with detail over time when i get better.

First Tank

I was possibly being a little ambitious when i made this but here is a jet i made.

My Jet 1
My Jet 2
The Jet is based of designs from Anubis
Any comments are welcome.

Mike

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#2 Talus

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 22:51

Really good stuff, i like the tank particuarly. Amazing for a first model :P

Keep up the good work.

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 22:53

Nice first attempts at using 3d max.

The Tank looks pretty good but could use some more detail, but the basic shape is there.

The Jet is much more complicated. You've done well to model something like this in such a short time. I know if i tried my hand at modeling it would take longer for me to make something like that. So nice job.

Keep modeling and your skills should steadily improve.

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 23:12

nice work for first models, but the models need more details imo. esspecially the tank and the tank tread could get some more details. for now it's a little to blocky imo. but as I said, nice work for the first models! ^^
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Posted 29 February 2008 - 23:38

Good start Mike, keep it up.

#6 Mbob61

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 02:32

Thanks for all the good feedback.
As i said, ill update both those models in time, ill probably do the jet first then do something with the tank/ its treads

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#7 Encrypted

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 06:02

They look good :P.

#8 Waris

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 06:14

That tank reminds me of the KV-1. Nice first efforts.

#9 Zeke

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 15:36

They look nice for first models, good job :P

#10 Mr. Mylo

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 16:22

This stuff looks really good to me ... Nice to see a new modeler in the forum :P

keep up the work and you will improve

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#11 Mbob61

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 22:44

Rather than work on my existing things, i thought id try and model something real life to improve my skills.
its an early-ish WIP. I will add more detail soon and fix some of the errors.ill also arm it as well as currently it has no real weapons. Can you guess what it is? :P

My First Heli

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#12 ☆FreedoM_FighteR☆

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 22:55

nicly done
a few segetions
less boxy :P
use plans for the rotrs
wider nose

thats it for now :D

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 23:22

Very nice work man, keep it up
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#14 Wizard

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Posted 03 March 2008 - 00:01

It looks like it's just stuck it's fingers down it's throat. Make it wider and you're onto a winner. Keep up the work chap! I can see huge potential here!

#15 Mbob61

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Posted 03 March 2008 - 22:30

An update to my helicopter
I've done everything you said.
Ive widened both the chassis and the nose, used the planes for rotors and attempted to make it less boxy.
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still got a bit to do but hope you like it

Mike

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Posted 04 March 2008 - 08:52

Good work fattening it up. Much better. Only constructive point now would be to try and perhaps soften the top lines. There is a very distinct square feel to it up top. Maybe try and make it alittle less boxy.

#17 Mr. Mylo

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Posted 04 March 2008 - 16:36

the parts are a bit boy but I think its ok... make the tail a bit thinner... otherwise its really great...
You learn really fast, keep up the great work

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#18 Mbob61

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Posted 06 March 2008 - 22:37

I have finally finished my heli with the stuff which i wanted.

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I know i could keep going but im happy with it as it is so i wont edit it anymore
Hope you all like it

Mike

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Posted 06 March 2008 - 22:39

That looks pretty damn good. I think that is most likely going to find its way into CnC FC. If you can, can you go on the IRC channel, I want to ask you about some stuff related to the mod.
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#20 Mbob61

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Posted 06 March 2008 - 23:03

ok, ill be there asap

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Posted 06 March 2008 - 23:14

good model! it's always hard for me to keep it simple, so when it's finished i end up with twice the amount of poly's that i had in mind, making the model pretty useless...
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#22 Mbob61

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Posted 12 March 2008 - 20:08

Here is something i have been working on recently

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#23 Camille

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Posted 12 March 2008 - 21:02

very nice! maybe thicken the tail 'wings' a little and make the nose just a tad less boxy.
i like that heli, looks very powerful
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#24 Mbob61

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Posted 12 March 2008 - 21:30

View Postka1000, on 12 Mar 2008, 21:02, said:

very nice! maybe thicken the tail 'wings' a little and make the nose just a tad less boxy.
i like that heli, looks very powerful


Thanks.
It aint my design, no the design the wings were that thin.
i haven't finished it yet so i might strat for it a little more and widen them
thanks for good comment

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#25 Mbob61

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Posted 14 March 2008 - 10:50

Another tank concept i found
The render kinda hides the cool tread covers but o well

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