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[Gen.Kenobi]

Really small update.

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 29 November 2010 - 23:42.

[R3ven]

Wow, you've really improved Kenobi. Those lessons must be working wonders.

So that's a jetpack from the concept huh? Looks way better than the concept

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thanks budy!

Hey boys! The first (public) Final Candidate of the "Lareira" Scene is here Please give me some feedback, so i can improve it

[Sgt. Nuker]

The jetpack reminds me of something from a Steampunk sci-fi film or something. The fans on the side look a bit ridiculous, but perhaps that's because of their sheer size. If they were a bit smaller they might not look so out of place, but other than that, the model looks well done.

[Gen.Kenobi]

"Lareira" RC2



Better fire.

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 04 December 2010 - 01:03.

[Pav:3d]

Fire looks good, rather realistic

[Chronosheep]

Looks very good. I must say you have improved alot since the first models in this topic.

I have couple of suggestions for how to make it even better:
- I would suggest adding some (charred, burning) logs of wood in the fireplace. It would look better if the fire wasn't hanging in thin air.
- In the top of the screen, it looks like you see over the top of the wall. Assuming this is the case, I would suggest adding a ceiling. Assuming that Blender uses some kind of raytracing, adding a ceiling would reflect more light back to the scene, giving it some more ambient/indirect lighting (which would be nice, as the scene is quite dark). If you have not already done it, I would also suggest adding walls behind the camera for the same reason.

Edited by Chronosheep, 04 December 2010 - 14:31.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thank you for your feedback!

- I'll add some effects for the burned wood soon,just need to figure out how first (They are there, but they are not really apearing, neither with a good texture.
- Anyways, that was a render problemam I corrected it.

So, RC3 is ready. I've added more effects within the Compositor, but i'm still unsure about the Ghosts into the lens...what do you think?

[TheDR]

Lens flare looks bad, you just wouldn't get that much from a fire (if at all). I could be wrong though as I've never really taken pictures of fires

[Gen.Kenobi]

Yep...you were right... It was too exagerated...

I tonned it down a bit...it's nearly imperceptive now

[n5p29]

still too much bling-bling?

[Gen.Kenobi]

RC3-2

[Gen.Kenobi]

RC4

Maybe the final...

[R3ven]

That's awesome man!

[Gen.Kenobi]

Thank you buddy!

Caveirão do Ar - Huey 2:



For something i'm planning.
The glass (in black) will be reflextive

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 10 December 2010 - 22:55.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Mg for Huey.

[Camille]

the helicopter is too dark man

the machinegun is looking good though!

[Major Fuckup]

The nose looks to long on it i think.

[Stalker]

The MG looks nice.

It seems like it has 10 times the polycount than the helicopter itself though.

[Gen.Kenobi]

Hey guys thanks for the comments.

The nose is a bit long because i merged two Huey Projects to make something unique and kinda cartoon, since i'm aiming for a stylized look.

I have added the MG box Also, as you can see i have added some textures. The Heli just looks low-poly because i haven't added the minor details, because there's no need for that - at least not for what i'm planning

Edited by Gen.Kenobi, 12 December 2010 - 14:49.

[n5p29]

that looks neat! o:

[Gen.Kenobi]

MG Done'd

[Wizard]

The ammo box texture looks quite flat. I think you should scratch it up somewhat. Nice model thought

[Gen.Kenobi]

Merry Chirstmass!
I can do a bg for you. If you want just let's me know your resolution and i can do it in your own language

[Zhao]

Gen.Kenobi, on 12 Dec 2010, 20:41, said:

MG Done'd

I'm heavy weapons guy.